No! I didn’t love you
I just got insanely stuck!
No! You weren’t my destiny
You were all of my bad luck!
If it wasn’t for the first time
I would never choose you.
Just badly mistaken and no crime
Today, I’m gone and let you loose too.
Unloved by you to this extent
Thirsty;
I drank love after meeting him
You were just a rough way
That smoothly lead me to him
And now, I’m here to rather stay
Don’t ask me
Why am I untying the KNOT
Because he values and loves me
Or because you loved me NOT
[When we go Loveless; We find real Love!]
I get it . completely. So well expressed. Every word u wrote is so filled with meaning. And I can feel the pain
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Hey,
Thanks!
The fact you could see meaning in each word, I am sure you felt it!
It’s really true:(
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Ummm yes I could feel it.. It must have been hard for u to go thru this situation
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I wish what I am going to say is not correct but don’t we all go through this?
I wish no one has to. But wishes don’t come true, you see!
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Yeah we all go thru hardships.. But more important is how do we overcome these obstacles.. And m sure u have that will power within too. But sometimes the sadness, the memories haunt us ..
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Yes yes yes..
they do haunt very badly! 😦
I feel you too have seen hardships but overcome them so you talk this mature!
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Yes u got me right. Every time I was shattered I still kept moving forward.. It isn’t easy either .. Tough decisions had to be taken at times … I honestly wish you to get the happiness u have been longing for
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Thanks a ton for the wishes!
I really liked having a word with you!
Alos, thank you for your time on this 🙂
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Love is a many splendored thing, and also it is said that Love is nature’s way of giving a reason for humans to be living on this earth! Humans are known and bound to err, for it is human to err.
Like in any sphere of human activity, it is quite natural to go wrong or commit mistakes in matters of love, but the wisdom lies in realizing the folly, rectifying the errors and moving on in life believing in the words – “someday, someone will walk into your life, and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else!”
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Hey..I cannot tell you how much I liked the last line. You are just so right!!
I can’t thank you enough for such a lovely and positive comment:):)
I just wanted to keep reading it but it ended beautifully! 🙂
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All good things come to an end, Shruti, as every beginning has an end! The trick is to be good and enjoy life as and when good fortune strikes, and treasure those memories for a rainy day. Life is nothing but a collection of memories, some good, some bad, some happy, some sad, some of success, some of failure, etc, etc. Love is a tender and memorable phase of one’s life yeilding memories according to one’s luck, fortune or call it fate or karma. Towards the sunset time of one’s life it is just these memories that lend support to one’s soul and strengthen one’s weak body to move on until it is time to say sayonara. So, be good, be happy and keep smiling!
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Thanks for the giving me a great message through this comment.
Keep smiling and wish you happiness too:)
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You’re welcome! Take care, be happy and always keep smiling! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Jin Okubo and commented:
Love to love
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Nice,,,,love it!!!
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Thank you so much Darie:)
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Just another frog Shruti on the way to meeting that prince who is waiting for you.
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Wow!
Well, thanks dear Paul:)
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Your welcome. He is out there Shruti.
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Paul, you’re really sweet.
And you making me see him.;)
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;O)
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I love this Shruti 🙂
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Thanks a ton Nicole:*
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You are welcome 🙂
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Untie the knot and keep moving forward in positive ways! Great poem and I like how you alternated with the red text for extra emphasis 🙂
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You observe really well:)
Thank you for the beautiful comment!
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We each define love in our own way,there isn’t just a blank definition to love,yes there are certainties,but as far as how,that is yours to have and to hold,thank you for your likes see you soon
Sheldon
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Yes, so correct that love means different things for different people. It takes so many forms.
Thanks for your comment!:)
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You wrote so incredibly! A beginner like me needs such allure..uuff this was like a big sigh! ❤
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Thank you dear!
You write oustandingly well for a beginner. I’m shocked you’re a beginner. I have seen your work and I was almost lost in your world.
Keep it up!
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You make me blush lol thanks shruti I am touched 🙂 means aloot. .I just need such motivation because life is a bitch a times and such comments just spark up my gloom 🙂
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Life is a bitch all the time! 😦
haha
Just write and vent out. Will keep you going!
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Thanks I ll keep doing this 🙂
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Aah ! Just a few days back (precisely when I turned to blogging) I was looking back at my life and felt so confused. It is sometimes so hard to make sense and to validate the actions of others as well as those of ourselves. And I read this lovely poem! “If it wasn’t the first time, I would never choose you”, “I just got insanely stuck”. Nailed it !
How could we possibly know the meaning of love without mistaking it for something else once! That bad experience is probably necessary for our own good. How could a right fit structure be introduced in a mould (heart), without eliminating the misfit. It has to be done for the greater good, though removing the mis-fit will definitely do some damage on the walls of its mould. But it would be worth it.
A great read ! Gives so many answers! Gives so much strength 🙂
(Pardon me for such a long comment, was difficult to stop) 😀
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Thanks instead, Prateek.
It’s by far my favourite comment:)
After all, comments section is the only way writers communicate here.
I really know how it feels mistaking love for something else. It’s human maybe to do that and rightly so!
I really can feel the blood rush which made you write this comment. Only tells how grounded you are to those experiences.
Thanks once again! 🙂
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Truly stated! Its human only 🙂 It feels good to be understood so well 🙂
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