WalK AwAy…!!!

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Walk; AWAY ... ! ! !

It’s TIME, for YOU, to WALK AWAY..

Yes, I can see you,
I hold your hand in mine
And you can see me too,
Imagination, is indeed, divine

I want to say things,
I want to talk
No I won’t get weak,
I will let you walk away

For yes, I can see you,
You can see me too
And if I look at you,
You look me in these eyes two

You have always read them,
This time, don’t want you to read what they say
No I won’t get weak,
I will let you walk away

Why did you occur?
What did you get!
We both lost each other;
We went through affliction and regret!

I wish I never met you,
Indecisive I became
What If we never met,
What if you never came!

Hardly can I remember,
It’s tough to infer…
Were you different?
Or nothing was ever proper!

Time wouldn’t wait,
Neither are you meant to stay
It’s harsh, albeit
But you might wanna walk away

Let’s detach, let’s let go,
For if we cling on to this
More answers we would want to know,
Strength needed, no retreat

In the world that I live,
More than anything and above everything
Wish you oodles of happiness and always be,
Yes I can see you and you can see me

This is it, somewhere else is your way
You ought to leave
So why do you ask me
How should I walk away?

Imperfection to perfection,
From panic to composure
You know, we will survive it!
From turbulence to serenity,
Certain things always stay
Even if, we walk away!

Unbelievable is your concern,
Unconditional is your care
Unsaid is our Bye;
Wish the world for you…
Go; smiling, walk away!

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40 comments

  1. Greg McPhearson · February 11, 2015

    Very nice, keep it up!

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  2. RioGoda · February 13, 2015

    I really really like this. It takes me deep yet it’s very light and gets to how we as people react interact and subtract from life’s renditions. Keep it up.

    Liked by 1 person

    • ShrutiInsights · February 13, 2015

      Thanks..some times when people leave you, you don’t know what to do..but the least you can do is “write it down”..Really..thanks for giving it a shot.
      Glad you could see the deep feelings:)

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  3. othermary · February 13, 2015

    You really capture the difficult feelings in this kind of situation. Some parts of this almost read like music lyrics. πŸ™‚

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  4. ShrutiInsights · February 13, 2015

    Wow.. I am happy if it looked that nice! πŸ™‚
    Thanks a ton dear!!

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  5. mythoughtlane · February 13, 2015

    Reading it I actually felt the detachment. Hardest thing to do is to let the other walk away , always chips a piece off your heart !

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    • ShrutiInsights · February 13, 2015

      And it’s sooo tough when someone leaves…
      Thanks that you read it so closely that you could feel that emotion I had:)

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  6. definatelyme · February 14, 2015

    wow this was beautiful, really loved your work πŸ™‚ ‘certain things always stay, even if we walk away’ :’) bravo!!
    thank you for sharing this

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  7. Andrew M Ferrell · February 17, 2015

    What a journey you take us on. When I get more time I am going to have to delve deeper into your blog. Glad this post was at the top. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Gary Dean Holdaway · February 17, 2015

    This is a really nice poem! I love it’s depth but how easy it is to read through. It’s not heavy, and yet, it’s message is clear. I just thought the final two lines cut the flawless flow of the entire piece- I read it as ‘unsaid is our goodbye’ instead of ‘unsaid id our bye,’ and it flowed nicer for me πŸ™‚ I hope you don’t mind me saying.

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    • ShrutiInsights · February 17, 2015

      Hey Gary,
      I totally get what you’re saying:)
      Your last line is full of emotions and pain.
      Thanks for the recommendations.
      All this can actually help us create poetry that has more impact, so I can’t thank you enough for honestly sharing your views on this piece.. It makes me even happier that you read it so closely
      Thanks for all your time!
      Glad to meet you πŸ™‚
      Works for me too..

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  9. lincahceria5 · February 18, 2015

    Write more please. I like your writing.
    By the way, I nominate you for the Liebster Award. Read about it here: https://masihbersambung.wordpress.com/2015/02/18/the-liebster-award/

    Liked by 1 person

    • ShrutiInsights · February 19, 2015

      Hey lincahceria5,
      I am so thrilled and thankful..
      You know you just gave me strength to post a poem I have written but had second thoughts about posting it up! πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Vashti Quiroz-Vega · February 19, 2015

    Beautiful Shruti. Heart-wrenching and courageous words. I enjoyed it very much.

    Liked by 1 person

    • ShrutiInsights · February 19, 2015

      It was supposed to be so.. The fact that you felt the emotion underneath makes me feel good
      Thank you!

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  11. papiyasen · February 20, 2015

    A heart touching post. Loved it. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    • ShrutiInsights · February 20, 2015

      Thanks a ton dear..
      means alot coming from you as you can write even deeper poems πŸ™‚

      Like

  12. sassycare · February 21, 2015

    The greatest distance between two people is from where you stand to the other person walking away. 😦

    Liked by 1 person

    • ShrutiInsights · February 21, 2015

      @sassycare ,veryy well said!
      You have incredible precision with which you write ocean deep feelings:)
      Stay blessed my dear! πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  13. barrira · February 23, 2015

    Painfully beautiful πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

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  15. Michelle Styles · March 3, 2015

    Powerful emotion I can see why it’s your favorite.

    Liked by 1 person

    • ShrutiInsights · March 3, 2015

      Some memories related to this!
      I wrote it when I was really sad, each word is what I felt:)

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      • Michelle Styles · March 3, 2015

        Writing raw always produces the best pieces. Mine was lessons explaining to friends and family why I cut. I have since quit but it took a while.But it’s raw, honest and true. It also just flowed out.

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        • ShrutiInsights · March 3, 2015

          Yeah I felt that in your writing:)
          I second that raw emotions wordified produce best pieces:)

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  16. abyssbrain · March 7, 2015

    You are really good at writing poems. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Prateek Kohli · April 9, 2015

    Each time I am transported to a whole new world via a smile when I read your soulful poetry. Loved the way you described that familiar feeling when we accept that something was not just meant to be with someone. But still we are unable to hold any hard feelings or grudge against him or her. πŸ™‚
    This poem would be the closest to me for a long time. Thank you for sharing. And you better keep writing now. As I see here, I had no chance of admiring and cherishing your poetry had everything would have been fine. So I would be a little selfish here and thank God that something so good came out of what happened πŸ˜‰

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    • ShrutiInsights · April 9, 2015

      Haha..Yeah something good came out πŸ™‚
      And you might wanna know that Walk away is the closest to my heart too. Its real for me and not just a poem as you rightly mentioned.
      Thank you for letting me know you could find that pain of departure, meaning we are not alone.
      Take care!

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      • Prateek Kohli · April 9, 2015

        That’s why it is your firs post too. I understand πŸ™‚ And believe me, no matter how much lonely we might sometimes feel, we are never alone πŸ™‚

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  18. writeitdown · May 25, 2015

    “Imperfection to perfection,
    From panic to composure
    You know, we will survive it!
    From turbulence to serenity,
    Certain things always stay
    Even if, we walk away!”

    It’s simple and very true, the way some things never change..

    Liked by 1 person

  19. writeitdown · May 25, 2015

    Likewise, see ya around!

    Liked by 1 person

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