Somehow

Somehow

Dazed!
I fell off
Untill yesterday, strong and upright
I stood tall

              Today I fell to rise, I feel tall
              Hunting when did I become weak enough to fall

Somehow, failed to gauge
Was that Me..
Or, Is this I?
Battling to know how

              Somewhere I myself wanted to fall, Somehow. . . 

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36 comments

  1. In My Cluttered Attic · March 2, 2015

    Just like that, but we always get back up.

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  2. ShrutiInsights · March 3, 2015

    Actually, same
    But any specific reasons you say that or it’s just that you’re too imperfect like me;)

    Like

  3. Donna · March 3, 2015

    I tend to do a lot of falling too but literally. Balance issues but also i am imperfect in my own perfect way

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  4. partandparcel2014 · March 3, 2015

    All of us are imperfect and it is ok 🙂 We are humans, we are special in God’s eyes, and in the eyes of those who love us. Have a beautiful day everyone!

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  5. mike7sedona · March 3, 2015

    Age catches up with every living being and it is an irreversible process, as time is said to be linear. Thanks for the timely introspective post!

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  6. lincahceria5 · March 3, 2015

    When you fall, make sure you don’t fall head first (what kind of comment is this?).
    All right, I will comment properly. I like this poem. You use shorter lines and the interpretation can vary. It’s brilliant!

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    • ShrutiInsights · March 3, 2015

      Superb!
      You’re following my intuitions, dear:)
      I kept it short so everyone could fill the gap per their lives and connect with this piece of falls and rises!
      I cannot believe it; you got me totally! :):)

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  7. Vashti Quiroz-Vega · March 4, 2015

    Hello! Beautiful and insightful poem. Falling is part of life and it makes us stronger. 😀

    Liked by 1 person

    • ShrutiInsights · March 4, 2015

      Hey Vashti,
      Thanks for the lovely comment! :):)
      And yes, falling is crucial.

      Like

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  9. Holistic Wayfarer · March 13, 2015

    I like this. The form helps give it a certain voice. =)

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  10. Samjoth · March 21, 2015

    Liked it ..!!! 🙂

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    • ShrutiInsights · March 21, 2015

      Thank you:)

      Liked by 1 person

      • Samjoth · March 21, 2015

        You have a really nice space 🙂
        Glad to be connecting..!!

        Liked by 1 person

        • ShrutiInsights · March 21, 2015

          Nice to hear that!
          Stay in touch:)

          Liked by 1 person

          • Samjoth · March 21, 2015

            Always 🙂
            I love conversations with bloggers and reading them through their posts 🙂
            That is one of my blogging objectives !!

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            • ShrutiInsights · March 21, 2015

              Yes, I second that
              Blogging is a step ahead of posting.
              It’s more than just posting. Talking and connecting here with diverse people has made me so dtrong and confident about my writing. People ate truly encouraging here
              Your objective would help you alot:)

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              • Samjoth · March 21, 2015

                Same here..Its a wonderful world out here..connecting with like minded and other different people 🙂
                You too keep in touch.. Glad to be in association of many a wonderful people; including you..!!

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              • ShrutiInsights · March 21, 2015

                Thanks!
                Have a great weekend ahead!
                🙂

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              • Samjoth · March 21, 2015

                🙂

                Like

  11. adi · March 22, 2015

    coool 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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  13. Geethu · May 28, 2015

    It’s ok to be imperfect 🙂

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