L❤ve kNOT

No! I didn’t love you
I just got insanely stuck!
No! You weren’t my destiny
You were all of my bad luck!

If it wasn’t for the first time
I would never choose you.
Just badly mistaken and no crime
Today, I’m gone and let you loose too.

Unloved by you to this extent
Thirsty;
I drank love after meeting him
You were just a rough way
That smoothly lead me to him
And now, I’m here to rather stay

Don’t ask me
Why am I untying the KNOT
Because he values and loves me
Or because you loved me NOT

[When we go Loveless; We find real Love!]

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36 comments

  1. theonlysup · March 19, 2015

    I get it . completely. So well expressed. Every word u wrote is so filled with meaning. And I can feel the pain

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    • ShrutiInsights · March 19, 2015

      Hey,
      Thanks!
      The fact you could see meaning in each word, I am sure you felt it!
      It’s really true:(

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      • theonlysup · March 19, 2015

        Ummm yes I could feel it.. It must have been hard for u to go thru this situation

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        • ShrutiInsights · March 19, 2015

          I wish what I am going to say is not correct but don’t we all go through this?
          I wish no one has to. But wishes don’t come true, you see!

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          • theonlysup · March 19, 2015

            Yeah we all go thru hardships.. But more important is how do we overcome these obstacles.. And m sure u have that will power within too. But sometimes the sadness, the memories haunt us ..

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            • ShrutiInsights · March 19, 2015

              Yes yes yes..
              they do haunt very badly! 😦
              I feel you too have seen hardships but overcome them so you talk this mature!

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              • theonlysup · March 19, 2015

                Yes u got me right. Every time I was shattered I still kept moving forward.. It isn’t easy either .. Tough decisions had to be taken at times … I honestly wish you to get the happiness u have been longing for

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  2. ShrutiInsights · March 19, 2015

    Thanks a ton for the wishes!
    I really liked having a word with you!
    Alos, thank you for your time on this 🙂

    Like

  3. mike7sedona · March 19, 2015

    Love is a many splendored thing, and also it is said that Love is nature’s way of giving a reason for humans to be living on this earth! Humans are known and bound to err, for it is human to err.
    Like in any sphere of human activity, it is quite natural to go wrong or commit mistakes in matters of love, but the wisdom lies in realizing the folly, rectifying the errors and moving on in life believing in the words – “someday, someone will walk into your life, and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else!”

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    • ShrutiInsights · March 20, 2015

      Hey..I cannot tell you how much I liked the last line. You are just so right!!
      I can’t thank you enough for such a lovely and positive comment:):)
      I just wanted to keep reading it but it ended beautifully! 🙂

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      • mike7sedona · March 20, 2015

        All good things come to an end, Shruti, as every beginning has an end! The trick is to be good and enjoy life as and when good fortune strikes, and treasure those memories for a rainy day. Life is nothing but a collection of memories, some good, some bad, some happy, some sad, some of success, some of failure, etc, etc. Love is a tender and memorable phase of one’s life yeilding memories according to one’s luck, fortune or call it fate or karma. Towards the sunset time of one’s life it is just these memories that lend support to one’s soul and strengthen one’s weak body to move on until it is time to say sayonara. So, be good, be happy and keep smiling!

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  4. Jin Okubo · March 20, 2015

    Reblogged this on Jin Okubo and commented:
    Love to love

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  5. Darie's Daily Dish · March 20, 2015

    Nice,,,,love it!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. In My Cluttered Attic · March 20, 2015

    Just another frog Shruti on the way to meeting that prince who is waiting for you.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Nicole · March 20, 2015

    I love this Shruti 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Christy Birmingham · March 20, 2015

    Untie the knot and keep moving forward in positive ways! Great poem and I like how you alternated with the red text for extra emphasis 🙂

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  9. sheldonk2014 · March 22, 2015

    We each define love in our own way,there isn’t just a blank definition to love,yes there are certainties,but as far as how,that is yours to have and to hold,thank you for your likes see you soon
    Sheldon

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    • ShrutiInsights · March 22, 2015

      Yes, so correct that love means different things for different people. It takes so many forms.
      Thanks for your comment!:)

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  10. izza ifzaal · April 1, 2015

    You wrote so incredibly! A beginner like me needs such allure..uuff this was like a big sigh! ❤

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    • ShrutiInsights · April 1, 2015

      Thank you dear!
      You write oustandingly well for a beginner. I’m shocked you’re a beginner. I have seen your work and I was almost lost in your world.
      Keep it up!

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      • izza ifzaal · April 1, 2015

        You make me blush lol thanks shruti I am touched 🙂 means aloot. .I just need such motivation because life is a bitch a times and such comments just spark up my gloom 🙂

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  11. Prateek Kohli · April 6, 2015

    Aah ! Just a few days back (precisely when I turned to blogging) I was looking back at my life and felt so confused. It is sometimes so hard to make sense and to validate the actions of others as well as those of ourselves. And I read this lovely poem! “If it wasn’t the first time, I would never choose you”, “I just got insanely stuck”. Nailed it !
    How could we possibly know the meaning of love without mistaking it for something else once! That bad experience is probably necessary for our own good. How could a right fit structure be introduced in a mould (heart), without eliminating the misfit. It has to be done for the greater good, though removing the mis-fit will definitely do some damage on the walls of its mould. But it would be worth it.
    A great read ! Gives so many answers! Gives so much strength 🙂
    (Pardon me for such a long comment, was difficult to stop) 😀

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    • ShrutiInsights · April 6, 2015

      Thanks instead, Prateek.
      It’s by far my favourite comment:)
      After all, comments section is the only way writers communicate here.
      I really know how it feels mistaking love for something else. It’s human maybe to do that and rightly so!
      I really can feel the blood rush which made you write this comment. Only tells how grounded you are to those experiences.
      Thanks once again! 🙂

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