It’s TIME, for YOU, to WALK AWAY.. …
Yes, I can see you,
I hold your hand in mine
And you can see me too,
Imagination, is indeed, divine
I want to say things,
I want to talk
No I won’t get weak,
I will let you walk away
For yes, I can see you,
You can see me too
And if I look at you,
You look me in these eyes two
You have always read them,
This time, don’t want you to read what they say
No I won’t get weak,
I will let you walk away
Why did you occur?
What did you get!
We both lost each other;
We went through affliction and regret!
I wish I never met you,
Indecisive I became
What If we never met,
What if you never came!
Hardly can I remember,
It’s tough to infer…
Were you different?
Or nothing was ever proper!
Time wouldn’t wait,
Neither are you meant to stay
It’s harsh, albeit
But you might wanna walk away
Let’s detach, let’s let go,
For if we cling on to this
More answers we would want to know,
Strength needed, no retreat
In the world that I live,
More than anything and above everything
Wish you oodles of happiness and always be,
Yes I can see you and you can see me
This is it, somewhere else is your way
You ought to leave
So why do you ask me
How should I walk away?
Imperfection to perfection,
From panic to composure
You know, we will survive it!
From turbulence to serenity,
Certain things always stay
Even if, we walk away!
Unbelievable is your concern,
Unconditional is your care
Unsaid is our Bye;
Wish the world for you…
Go; smiling, walk away!
Very nice, keep it up!
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Glad you liked it!
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I really really like this. It takes me deep yet it’s very light and gets to how we as people react interact and subtract from life’s renditions. Keep it up.
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Thanks..some times when people leave you, you don’t know what to do..but the least you can do is “write it down”..Really..thanks for giving it a shot.
Glad you could see the deep feelings:)
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You really capture the difficult feelings in this kind of situation. Some parts of this almost read like music lyrics. 🙂
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Wow.. I am happy if it looked that nice! 🙂
Thanks a ton dear!!
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Reading it I actually felt the detachment. Hardest thing to do is to let the other walk away , always chips a piece off your heart !
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And it’s sooo tough when someone leaves…
Thanks that you read it so closely that you could feel that emotion I had:)
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wow this was beautiful, really loved your work 🙂 ‘certain things always stay, even if we walk away’ :’) bravo!!
thank you for sharing this
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Anytime..I loved your poem ” nor our fault”
It’s not our fault still….people walk away!
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🙂 right
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What a journey you take us on. When I get more time I am going to have to delve deeper into your blog. Glad this post was at the top. 🙂
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Thanks for taking a look into this journey…:)
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This is a really nice poem! I love it’s depth but how easy it is to read through. It’s not heavy, and yet, it’s message is clear. I just thought the final two lines cut the flawless flow of the entire piece- I read it as ‘unsaid is our goodbye’ instead of ‘unsaid id our bye,’ and it flowed nicer for me 🙂 I hope you don’t mind me saying.
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Hey Gary,
I totally get what you’re saying:)
Your last line is full of emotions and pain.
Thanks for the recommendations.
All this can actually help us create poetry that has more impact, so I can’t thank you enough for honestly sharing your views on this piece.. It makes me even happier that you read it so closely
Thanks for all your time!
Glad to meet you 🙂
Works for me too..
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Write more please. I like your writing.
By the way, I nominate you for the Liebster Award. Read about it here: https://masihbersambung.wordpress.com/2015/02/18/the-liebster-award/
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Hey lincahceria5,
I am so thrilled and thankful..
You know you just gave me strength to post a poem I have written but had second thoughts about posting it up! 🙂
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I’m glad to read that. Post that poem, then. Where is it?
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Haha
I will post it today
Promise☺️
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Beautiful Shruti. Heart-wrenching and courageous words. I enjoyed it very much.
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It was supposed to be so.. The fact that you felt the emotion underneath makes me feel good
Thank you!
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A heart touching post. Loved it. 🙂
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Thanks a ton dear..
means alot coming from you as you can write even deeper poems 🙂
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The greatest distance between two people is from where you stand to the other person walking away. 😦
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@sassycare ,veryy well said!
You have incredible precision with which you write ocean deep feelings:)
Stay blessed my dear! 🙂
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Painfully beautiful 🙂
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You got it bang on dear! 🙂
Thanks alot
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Powerful emotion I can see why it’s your favorite.
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Some memories related to this!
I wrote it when I was really sad, each word is what I felt:)
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Writing raw always produces the best pieces. Mine was lessons explaining to friends and family why I cut. I have since quit but it took a while.But it’s raw, honest and true. It also just flowed out.
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Yeah I felt that in your writing:)
I second that raw emotions wordified produce best pieces:)
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You are really good at writing poems. 🙂
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Thank you so much! 🙂
I feel so nice after reading your comment:)
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Each time I am transported to a whole new world via a smile when I read your soulful poetry. Loved the way you described that familiar feeling when we accept that something was not just meant to be with someone. But still we are unable to hold any hard feelings or grudge against him or her. 🙂
This poem would be the closest to me for a long time. Thank you for sharing. And you better keep writing now. As I see here, I had no chance of admiring and cherishing your poetry had everything would have been fine. So I would be a little selfish here and thank God that something so good came out of what happened 😉
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Haha..Yeah something good came out 🙂
And you might wanna know that Walk away is the closest to my heart too. Its real for me and not just a poem as you rightly mentioned.
Thank you for letting me know you could find that pain of departure, meaning we are not alone.
Take care!
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That’s why it is your firs post too. I understand 🙂 And believe me, no matter how much lonely we might sometimes feel, we are never alone 🙂
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“Imperfection to perfection,
From panic to composure
You know, we will survive it!
From turbulence to serenity,
Certain things always stay
Even if, we walk away!”
It’s simple and very true, the way some things never change..
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Yes…and we learn to live with them!
Welcome to my space dear..Hope to connect with you:)
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Likewise, see ya around!
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